Critique Please

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If your wondering about my mood, it's because a perverted little freak in my art class just so happens to be my partner for papermache sculptures and , despite the fact that he tries not to, he turns every little thing into an inuendo. It's driving me insane! I'm just lucky that the teacher understands that I have my reasons for whapping him with my book (he's either bugging me when I'm trying to work on our project ALONE, making perverted jokes about the fact we're making a miniture Daschound, aka weiner dog, or, more commonly, both).

Ok. Back to the reason for this journal. I have several ideas for fanfics I had a while back and, rereading them, I think I'll try to work on a few of them. Thing is, there's so many. I'm going to give a summary of some of the more promising ones and I'd like you guys to read it and give me some critique (if you do please be specific on which one you mean). I honestly need to know your opinions because I'm not gonna write them if no one's gonna read them besides me.

Title: Untitled 1
Series: FullMetal Alchemist (anime)
Summary: What if Envy had shown up the night the Elric brothers attempted to ressurect their mom? What if he offered to help them recover what they lost? How would it change the adventures of the FullMetal Alchemist?


Title: Untitled 2
Series: FullMetal Alchemist (anime)
Summary: Envy is mortaly wounded and found by non-other than Hohenheim of Light. Will he save Envy's life or will he once again abandon his creation and oldest son?


Title: Untitled 3
Series: FMA (anime)
Summary: What is worse(funnier) than the idea of Ed and Al taking care of a baby Envy? Envy taking care of a baby Ed and Al of course! An alchemic rebound,a 5 year old Ed, and a 4 year old (pre-armor) Alphonse spells nothing but trouble for everyones favorite palm tree. Let the chaos ensue! (I might change it to just being Ed. Al would still be in the armor)

That's all of them for now. Please comment.
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